A friend of yours is going to visit your region and has asked you to help arrange accommodation. Write a letter to him/her.
In your letter, you should:
_ give details of the accommodation
_ tell what he should bring with him
_ suggest sightseeing places he could visit.
Dear Andrew,
I have received your letter which you wrote to me few days ago and am very excited about your 3-day trip to my hometown, Ho Chi Minh city. Since you also request for an accommodation arrangement, I’m writing to inform you some details of it, what you should bring along when you get there and a number of worth-visiting destinations in my city.
Your place of stay is going to be a four-star hotel situated just right at the city center where you can easily access to most of the tourist attractions of the city as well as the convenient stores. Also, I have booked you a single room which is fully furnished so you can prepare your own meals at night when restaurants and food stalls aren’t opened. After picking you up from the airport, I’ll ride you to the hotel.
The price of the room can be paid on the date of arrival and by credit card. Therefore, it is advisable for you to bring along yours. Other than that and your clothes, I think it should be fine, as again, the room is fully furnished so everything including toiletries are available.
Besides, there are a few recommendations of destinations I would like to share with you during your trip. First and foremost, the Independent Palace is a place you can never say no to visit. It is an exciting place with many aesthetically ancient historical features which go along with many intriguing backgrounds and stories. Besides, the Notre-dame Cathedral of Saigon is another interesting place for people who love taking photos like you. I’m sure you will end up having picturesque photos after going there.
I really anticipate your arrival. If possible, I will see if I’m free on these days so that I can bring you to more places.
See you soon
Yours sincerely,
Diana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing including toiletries are available. Besides, there are a few recommendations...
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Line 25, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng you to more places. See you soon Yours sincerely, Diana
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, really, so, therefore, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 311.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81993569132 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70001897394 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 127.690721649 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6967948112 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302818206288 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102320498968 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502526764482 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163992205424 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586933108908 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.