GT Letter: Your town has an annual festival. You want to help this year. Write a letter to the festival manager.
– Tell the manger about last year’s festival
– Say how you can help
– Ask questions about the festival
Dear Festival Manager,
My name is Mr.Ravi, I am living in Bhagyanagar Colony. I am writing this letter with regards to Navami festival that held in Sri Rama temple in last year.
The last year festival happened well, however, some devotees faced inconvenience regarding water facilities and transport services.
This event is representing our town importance and identity. So, it is our responsibility to great services to spectators.
If you agree, I want to part in event organization. I would like help in festival plans, then we together give best hospitality services to devotees.
I want to take care about time table of transport services, because I have experience in this area.
Moreover, I want to know some information about this year festival, firstly, how many people are going attend this year? if we know this, we could plan services according to that. Secondly, where has been parking area allocated? then, we could assume how many vehicles fit there.
I look forword to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ravi
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| 2018-04-06 | ravigurijala | 93 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ravi
...Dear Festival Manager, My name is Mr.Ravi, I am living in Bhagyanagar Colony. I a...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
...elp in festival plans, then we together give best hospitality services to devotees. I wa...
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Line 10, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...many people are going attend this year? if we know this, we could plan services ac...
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Line 10, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
... where has been parking area allocated? then, we could assume how many vehicles fit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20710059172 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83543726648 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704142011834 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3532376351 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8571428571 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333843365726 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872686131177 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717142640376 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12749552954 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550578421515 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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