Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter
• suggest how you could help her in her home
• say why you would like to do this work
• explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs. Barrett,
I am writing to let you know that I am a potential candidate for your house helper position next summer. As doing house chores can sometimes be quite a time-consuming and exhausting experience, I am confident that with my energetic and hard-working personality, I will be able to be at your service whenever you need me.
Currently, I am learning and practicing my English, and being able to have a part-time job during the summer is an ideal opportunity for me to keep improving my English communication proficiency. In addition, I am more than happy to earn a little bit more money using my free summer time to cover the cost of living and other expenses.
Since I am a full-time student, I will be available for most of the day in the summer period; this includes any public holidays or special event days. There is only one exception: Saturday and Sunday mornings from 9 am to 12 pm. My badminton class runs every week so that I will be occupied.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Henry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ddition, I am more than happy to earn a little bit more money using my free summer time to...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...n a little bit more money using my free summer time to cover the cost of living and other e...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideration. Yours faithfully, Henry
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96320469345 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3356422374 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151309886247 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765757045184 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667207829857 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103976055512 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624766135862 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.