Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. HelShe would like your advice about finding a place to live.
Write an email to your friend. In your email
• describe where you lived when you were a student at the university
• recommend the best wav for himlher to look for accommodation
• warn himlher of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation
Dear Darren,
Having to know that you are going to study at the same university as me a few years ago makes me feel so excited about your upcoming journey. This gives me the motivation to have some words of advice regarding your accommodation ahead. When I started uni, I chose to live in a homestay with an Australian family as that was also my first time in a whole new environment. Living in a homestay allowed me to get to know more about the cuisine, traditions, and lifestyle. This knowledge helped me later on after I moved out to live in student accommodation.
Student accommodation is one of the decent options for university students in general because they provide a wide range of exemplary facilities and quick access to school. I suggest you have a look at some government education supporting websites, which will recommend a few legit and reliable accommodations targeting students.
Although hiring a student accommodation usually costs more than a shared room from many online room finding pages, it is a place that is trustworthy. The reason for that is regular share room requires knowledge about leasing terms and conditions as well as the ability to cope with further issues later on. Secondly, students will generally make their decision based on the total rental fee of the accommodation, which is sometimes not reasonable. They will also need to take into account the distance between casual places such as school and supermarkets and the travel mode like public transport and its fees.
Those are a few things that I would like to share with you as an old friend. I look forward to hearing from you.
Henry
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- A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called The book that influenced me most Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most In your letter describe what this book was about explain 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80072876813 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4627083774 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249061151955 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770163372424 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051980668668 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138437193894 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611787473008 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.