Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays.
In your letter, you should:
• explain your travel plans
• describe the interesting places you plan to visit
Dear Khushbu,
Hope this letter will find you in pink of your health. I would like to visit your country for holidays and want to make that visit quite memorable for life. As you might be knowing that, this was in my bucket list since very long.
Well, I have thought that I will travel in May 2024 during summer, because I know that this season will be right choice for all of us. The tempreture would be around 20c to 25c. Moreover, my flight has booked by me for 7 days. Not only flights but also taxi booking also done by one of my bosom friends just like you. Almost everything is wellset.
Let me give you idea about sightseen which I have finalised, those are white tomb, Golden Temple, Border of America and many more. everything is suggested by tour guide. But I want your suggestions too for my this trip because you have been there in America since 2010, that is why you would have travelled a lot as well as you can have knowledge for the best sightseens.
See you soon.
Best wishes,
Rehana Diwan.
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| 2021-12-24 | mahyarr | 73 | view |
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... quite memorable for life. As you might be knowing that, this was in my bucket list since ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everything
...emple, Border of America and many more. everything is suggested by tour guide. But I want ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39682539683 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12482451104 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6967717853 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9230769231 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300975297918 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912755628299 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967017167421 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209593701871 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112938575167 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... quite memorable for life. As you might be knowing that, this was in my bucket list since ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everything
...emple, Border of America and many more. everything is suggested by tour guide. But I want ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39682539683 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12482451104 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6967717853 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9230769231 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300975297918 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912755628299 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967017167421 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209593701871 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112938575167 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.