Write a letter to your friend in another country where you would like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should:
• Explain your travel plans
• Describe the interesting places you plan to visit
• Ask for suggestions for sightseeing options
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you well. I miss you so much and a lot of things have changed since our last meeting that you were here last March. But guess what! Julia, my new bride, and I have planned to visit Toronto for the Christmas holidays this January. We can finally have a double date with our partners together. Wouldn’t that be amazing?
Ok, let me share some of the plans that we have in mind. First, I want to ask you to look for a temporary place for us because a hotel would cost us an arm and a leg as we estimate that our visit would last at least 40 days; since during the pandemic we’ve never left the city, can you imagine how exhausting that is?
About the places that we can see, after all those astonishing pictures and clips of you in Niagara Waterfalls, I immediately wrote them down on my bucket list. So you have to take us there. Another interesting place that we would like to visit is the landmark of the city, the CN Tower which is the most impossible to miss.
But these aren’t the only sightseeing that we wish to visit for sure. However, since you’ve been living there for almost a decade, you know the best places more than anyone else. So any suggestions are welcome.
Say hello to Sarah and we see you soon.
Warm wishes,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...dn’t that be amazing? Ok, let me share some of the plans that we have in mind. First, I wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, look, so, well, after all, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35269709544 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20075884053 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639004149378 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2070319576 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315676021886 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930853385295 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664270137235 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175921921489 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542991029939 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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