You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
explain what you like about the cafeteria
say what is wrong with it
suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing in connection with our college cafeteria. As I have my lunch daily, at the cafeteria only, I really like the place and its ambience. In the following discussion, I want to list out some good qualities, our cafeteria has, as well as some of the improvements that can be made, as I am a regular visitor their.
I usually visit our cafeteria daily, between 2 PM to 4 PM, for my lunch. As it’s quite hot outside, in these days; the cooling and ambience is really adorable in the cafeteria. The food being served is really scrumptious! Plus the cafeteria service is impeccable.
However, cafeteria don’t have any WiFi connection available their. It feels great inconvenience for the students who wants to do their work while enjoying their food. For me, it’s a big negative point, as I always need an internet connection around that time.
So, the cafeteria should install a WiFi connection in it’s premises.
Secondly, I would suggest, out cafeteria should add more items in its non-veg section, as their are very limited options out there in this section.
At last, I would reiterate that our cafe is a great place to have some good food and hangout with people, but it can be more attractive and useful by incorporating above items.
Looking to have a positive action on the above,
Yours faithfully,
Pardeep Singh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ualities, our cafeteria has, as well as some of the improvements that can be made, as I am ...
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Line 10, column 91, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...d more items in its non-veg section, as their are very limited options out there in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95299145299 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77564914165 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9290886091 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1538461538 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17079315474 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637028294952 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391020278116 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684587531927 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532046236573 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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