You got to know about a certain position that interests you at an information session conducted for college students. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the firm. In your letter
introduce yourself
talk about what special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Norman,
my name is Edward Lee. I am currently in the final year of my post-graduation studies in Business Science from Yale University. I would like to offer my application for the post of associate Consultant at ignited Mins, Inc.
The Chief Technology Officer, Mr. Todd Hicks, suggested that I apply for the position when I recently spoke with him at the information session conducted for college students at the Plaza Hotel. enclosed with this letter is my resume, which provides further details of my previous experience and qualification.
I have worked closely with a management-consulting firm<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="management-consulting "></span> as part of our year project. I have also enclosed the recommendation letter given by the manager. I am confident that I can make a significant contribution to your firm. Based on my qualifications and experience, I believe that I will be a good fit for your organization.
I look forward to meeting you in person to discuss the possibility of working at ignited Minds, Inc. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Your sincerely,
Edward Lee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Norman, my name is Edward Lee. I am currently in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sociate Consultant at ignited Mins, Inc. The Chief Technology Officer, Mr. Todd H...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Enclosed
...or college students at the Plaza Hotel. enclosed with this letter is my resume, which pr...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... previous experience and qualification. I have worked closely with a management-...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mmendation letter given by the manager. I am confident that I can make a signific...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime and consideration. Your sincerely, Edward Lee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44134078212 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.47175908549 2.54303337028 176% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7778423772 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202414666852 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718856650794 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757749189342 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123660430472 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712383163173 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.