In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, people think no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. I complete disagree with this, I believe that the food or product from animals is the two majors factors involved.
First and foremost, I want to emphasize the food from animals to have an important role in our life. Because animals such as fish, type of meat are the main material in all the meal in the world. And additional, they support to essential nutrients for the health, but vegetable or fruit cannot be replaced. For example, the nutrients are protein, canxi, lipid, ... from fish. Next, nowadays, the proportion of people suffering from heart-related diseases and overwhelming, health experts advise people to use the main source of fish food to provide protein. That is the reason cause the food from animals really important with the human.
On the other hand, we need to prevent killing animals to provide clothes or make medicine. That is indeed cruel and immoral and to have an influence on the ecosystem. In the clothing industry, we are possible to avoid using animals. For example, synthetic fur, cotton, silk look as good as the real thing and their production do not involve animals.
In conclusion, we still need use to the food from animals and can be replaced with clothing and medicine from animals by other materials good and eco-friend. Personally, I think this is the best way to protect the ecosystem of animals and to demand our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87159533074 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55252918288 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4532102833 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461604353564 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151773013786 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18341530176 0.0667982634062 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30760775456 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.216172286806 0.056905535591 380% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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