Children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and include example
A lot of billionaires nowadays used to live in poor families when they were young.growing up in poor families had taught them a lot of great things during their life.Therefore,some believes that growing up in families which have bad condition could help you a lot than in wealthier ones.I completely agree with this statement.
First of all,there is no doubt that children who grow up in poor families will be more independent.This means that parents who in poor families need to work all day to earn money and they are too busy to spend time with their children.The kids have to do anything themselves.For instance,some parents start to work at 6 a.m and finish at 9p.m.Therefore,their children have to have breakfast,lunch and dinner themselves or even go to school on their foot.
Moreover,not only given an independence but they are also given experiences for life which are children in wealthy families can not have and really important when they became older.First,in some countries children can have a job when they are just 15 years old.they need to work to help their parents have more incomes.they can learn a lot of experiences when working.Second,if they do not want to work themselves,they can help their parents to work.they can earn experiences from their parents.
On the other hand,in some cases,children from wealthier families will be prepared for life better.Their parents can buy them things they want.For example sports equipment and latest technological gadgets.Additionally,they also have better conditional education when learning in private schools which have very high educational fee.
In conclusion,if you grow up in families that has good parents,you will be well prepared for life whether in good conditional or poor families.However,a poor childhood can force a child to become more self-reliant and lead them on the path to a successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25249169435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5882459643 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1334608517 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 316.2 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.2 20.7667163134 290% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.2 7.06120827912 498% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196856883058 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126248490642 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351789778552 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126248490642 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351789778552 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 13.0946893788 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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