Tourism is a valuable business for many countries and can bring them many benefits, but it can also cause damage to local communities.
discuss the arguments on both sides of the issue. what is your opinion on the matter? Give reasons for your answer and include any examples from your own experience.
tourism is a valuable business for many countries, and can bring them many benefits, but also cause damage to local communities. I believed that tourism should have two majors factor involved.
Nowadays, the world has many countries development, so the poor countries and other countries are not yet developed and need to help. that is one of the reasons why they have tourism there. Firstly, tourism comes to the country and made a lot of jobs for local people, the amount of professional for the country. Secondly, the local government has funds from taxes of travel agency. And additionally, the information of the local can be PR for other places and to widely people know about the local. When someone visited here, they always want to go to beautiful places. For this reason, the landscape is better looked after. Next, tourism help improves the overall levels of economic in the local, make the opportunities for cooperation in other areas.
In contrast, the local has developed tourism entails many negative impacts on all aspects. For example one of the problems are about the environment, social, traffic, ... As a result, social evils appear more and more, the natural landscape is destroyed and pollution to some issue about the traffic jam. Because the number of people using transport means increase.
In conclusion, there are strong arguments on both sides of this debate. tourism creative many occasion developed for the local, while travel organizes damage to social. In my opinion, I feel that tourism should grow more and the local government must take management measures to limit negative impacts on communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13483146067 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62666160588 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3133510113 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380734456453 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111721042531 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132212103533 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246835553374 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134016197112 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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