you have invited some friends to come on holiday,you are going to airport to meet them. thry have asked you how to get to your house from the airport.
write a letter to yourfriends,
expalin that you will meet tehm at the airport
give thrm some idea of what you have planned for them
tell them some important things they might fing useful
Dear Friends,
Hope you are all ready for the exciting adventure i have planned for us.
Firslty, dont worry about how to get from airport to my house as I will be coming to pick you guys up from there. I will be waiting by the exit of gate number 2 near the taxi stand by the time you arrive.
It will be an interesting week. we will kick off the week by visting the wildlife santury to explore the animals in their natural habitat.Next day we will visit an adventure park and enjoying the thrilling rides followed by visiting exotic beaches the coming day.Last two days are for rest and rejuvinating our bodies with spa and massages. If u want we can go on a hike in nearby mountain.
Dont forget to bring your sunscreen otherwise the sun will burn your skin apart.Do carry a good fitting pair of shoes for all our long journeys to make it confortable.
Cant wait to see you all. Safe travels.
Your Friend,
Mobi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...enture i have planned for us. Firslty, dont worry about how to get from airport to ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...rrive. It will be an interesting week. we will kick off the week by visting the w...
^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Next
...re the animals in their natural habitat.Next day we will visit an adventure park and...
^^^^
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Last
... visiting exotic beaches the coming day.Last two days are for rest and rejuvinating ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ating our bodies with spa and massages. If u want we can go on a hike in nearby mo...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...e can go on a hike in nearby mountain. Dont forget to bring your sunscreen otherwis...
^^^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Do
...rwise the sun will burn your skin apart.Do carry a good fitting pair of shoes for ...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
... long journeys to make it confortable. Cant wait to see you all. Safe travels. You...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39766081871 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35819755783 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3081108587 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 4.34317383033 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216732182188 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830748439472 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074214318352 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113417022516 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797507498386 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.