you have seen an advertisement for weekend job in a hotel in the townwhere you are staying. you have worked in a hotel before and think taht the job would be suitable for you. you must apply in writing. write a letter to the hotel manager expressing your interest
in your letter introduce yourself
explain why you think you would be suitable for the job
ask what you would be expected to do
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing in connection with rrcent advertisment for a job opening at your marigold hotel for the weekends.
My name is mobi bo and I am currently pursuing masters in culinary art and am hear for my summer vaccationin this beautiful town of Malta and hope to make some cash on sideto atleast meet my basic needs.
I believe to be a perfect candidate for this job as i have completed my mid session internship in seasons hotel in rome last year. there i have learnt basic knife skills in kitchen and assisting them for servicing.Hence I am familiarizes with the work environment and knows how it work.
I would like to work as be an assistance to the chef by lending my skills such as chopping, grinding and mixing. I can even undertake waitressing work if you would allow me.I can do all these work with ease.However, cooking is still not at par of mine as i am still learning the basics.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mobi bo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'heard'.
Suggestion: heard
...pursuing masters in culinary art and am hear for my summer vaccationin this beautifu...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...hip in seasons hotel in rome last year. there i have learnt basic knife skills in kit...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...itchen and assisting them for servicing.Hence I am familiarizes with the work environ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...itchen and assisting them for servicing.Hence I am familiarizes with the work environ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...h the work environment and knows how it work. I would like to work as be an assista...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... waitressing work if you would allow me.I can do all these work with ease.However...
^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... waitressing work if you would allow me.I can do all these work with ease.However...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ow me.I can do all these work with ease.However, cooking is still not at par of mine as...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... cooking is still not at par of mine as i am still learning the basics. I will l...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49444444444 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75454170417 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661111111111 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4596325693 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260566293059 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105124685646 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630938353721 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14141281219 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073192100311 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.