you have seen an advertisment in an austrailian magazine for someone to live in with a family for six months and look after their six old child write a letter to the parents in thsi letter explain why you would like this job give details of why you would

Essay topics:

you have seen an advertisment in an austrailian magazine for someone to live in with a family for six months and look after their six old child
write a letter to the parents in thsi letter
explain why you would like this job
give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in autrailia

Dear sir or madam,
I am writing in connection with the recent advertistment in times magazine that you are looking for someone to live and look after your child for nexr six months.
i would like to apply for the same. I am planning to kove to austrailia for 6 months training course here in austrailia and believ this can be a wonderful opportunity for me to earn alongside to living here during my stay.
I believe i am a suitable person for this job as i am pursuing child psychiatry and i am fully equiped to take care of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency care and treatment hence being more than capable to handle any situationwith ease.
beside this in my free time i would love to explore the exotic beaches and wildlife here including kangroos and koalas.additionaly i would like to get to know the culture and people here to understand their carefree and lively attitude as a part of my ongoing research.
i will look forward for a prompt response.
tour faithfully
mobi mo

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2023-05-19 mobi 73 view
Essays by user mobi :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... after your child for nexr six months. i would like to apply for the same. I am ...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... after your child for nexr six months. i would like to apply for the same. I am ...
^
Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...living here during my stay. I believe i am a suitable person for this job as i ...
^
Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i am a suitable person for this job as i am pursuing child psychiatry and i am f...
^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...b as i am pursuing child psychiatry and i am fully equiped to take care of childr...
^
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...take care of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: moreover,
...take care of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency c...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
...able to handle any situationwith ease. beside this in my free time i would love to ex...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...with ease. beside this in my free time i would love to explore the exotic beache...
^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cluding kangroos and koalas.additionaly i would like to get to know the culture a...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ude as a part of my ongoing research. i will look forward for a prompt response...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ude as a part of my ongoing research. i will look forward for a prompt response...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tour
...l look forward for a prompt response. tour faithfully mobi mo
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58918918919 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80560849132 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6298811711 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251537416887 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105512116804 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944971629582 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14369215592 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100483784754 0.0580467560999 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.