you have seen an advertisment in an austrailian magazine for someone to live in with a family for six months and look after their six old child
write a letter to the parents in thsi letter
explain why you would like this job
give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in autrailia
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing in connection with the recent advertistment in times magazine that you are looking for someone to live and look after your child for nexr six months.
i would like to apply for the same. I am planning to kove to austrailia for 6 months training course here in austrailia and believ this can be a wonderful opportunity for me to earn alongside to living here during my stay.
I believe i am a suitable person for this job as i am pursuing child psychiatry and i am fully equiped to take care of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency care and treatment hence being more than capable to handle any situationwith ease.
beside this in my free time i would love to explore the exotic beaches and wildlife here including kangroos and koalas.additionaly i would like to get to know the culture and people here to understand their carefree and lively attitude as a part of my ongoing research.
i will look forward for a prompt response.
tour faithfully
mobi mo
- you have invited some friends to come on holiday you are going to airport to meet them thry have asked you how to get to your house from the airport write a letter to yourfriends expalin that you will meet tehm at the airport give thrm some idea of what y 73
- you have seen an advertisement for weekend job in a hotel in the townwhere you are staying you have worked in a hotel before and think taht the job would be suitable for you you must apply in writing write a letter to the hotel manager expressing your int 73
- you have seen an advertisment in an austrailian magazine for someone to live in with a family for six months and look after their six old child write a letter to the parents in thsi letter explain why you would like this job give details of why you would 73
- How important is deess code in our lives doyounconsider dressing appropriately or you of the opinion that everyone should be able to wear exactly what tehy like 56
- schooling should be compulasoru till 18 years do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... after your child for nexr six months. i would like to apply for the same. I am ...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... after your child for nexr six months. i would like to apply for the same. I am ...
^
Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...living here during my stay. I believe i am a suitable person for this job as i ...
^
Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i am a suitable person for this job as i am pursuing child psychiatry and i am f...
^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...b as i am pursuing child psychiatry and i am fully equiped to take care of childr...
^
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...take care of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: moreover,
...take care of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of children of any age group. moreover i am trained and certified in emergency c...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
...able to handle any situationwith ease. beside this in my free time i would love to ex...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...with ease. beside this in my free time i would love to explore the exotic beache...
^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cluding kangroos and koalas.additionaly i would like to get to know the culture a...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ude as a part of my ongoing research. i will look forward for a prompt response...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ude as a part of my ongoing research. i will look forward for a prompt response...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tour
...l look forward for a prompt response. tour faithfully mobi mo
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58918918919 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80560849132 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6298811711 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251537416887 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105512116804 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944971629582 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14369215592 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100483784754 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.