schooling should be compulasoru till 18 years. do you agree or disagree
Eruditionis an important part of human life. That is why sone people believe that students should stay in school till they are of 18 years of age. I agree with the statement to greater extent. This upcoming essay will bolster my viepoint with some logical reasons.
Schools provide with basic skills necessary for everyday lifeincluding speaking and writing.A child usually start school at the tender age of 4 years or around when he bearly can write and recite counting till 10. They learn all these things which are essential for day to day life like alphabets, numbers and many more things. Hence, schoolong is pivtol part of our life.
Moreover,learning about new and advanced technology and skills, higher educat ion is mandatory.Not only for ones personal development but ll to form realtionships with others around. Learning to liv with harmony with others around and learn to cooperate with themis also imparted through knowledge. Otherwise there will be no differnec left btween a human and an animal.We have ro utise thsi to our full potenial for a better future.
To conclude, eduaction is a tool available to humans for its evolution and advancement.Not only for leanring day to day skills but also to adapt and live well by forming deeper meanigful connections with others around.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06074766355 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75203495485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705607476636 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8434440361 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111000987103 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454488353919 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801249280146 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719620725965 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722189877816 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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