You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Fred,
Thank you for your assistance in directing the mail man to my apartment last weekend. Although we haven’t met officially, I already know you’re going to be a good neighbour. My name is Odunayo and I’m the new guy next door. I’m Nigerian by nationality, I work in construction and I’ll be living alone. I should round up my moving in process by next weekend.
In my culture, we like to celebrate every win and so, I’d like to have a house warming celebration to mark my move into the new apartment and for close friends and family members to get acquainted to my new apartment. I plan to have it on the evening of Saturday the 30th of March, 2019. I plan to make and serve only dishes local to my culture. No alcohol would be served and only Nigerian music would be played all through.
If the Nigerian music and culture sounds like something you may be interested in, feel free to hop in anytime from 5pm next Saturday. However, if you would be home, Kindly bear with us if our chatter becomes too loud. The party should be over by 9pm.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours sincerely,
Odunayo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2019'.
Suggestion: March 2019
... on the evening of Saturday the 30th of March, 2019. I plan to make and serve only dishes l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66176470588 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61257035063 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8089256642 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9285714286 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180975937743 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642277157497 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628396616362 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862904210073 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276818234093 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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