You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for the international call. Write a letter to the company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for a bill to be changed
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the invalid statement of the bill generated on my mobile number 9478682521. I have been using your renowned services for the last five years and so far it has been quite a good experience. However, last month's billing charges were extremely dis-approving.
For your notice, I have been charged an additional Rs.3000 for the international calls done in the previous month. These charges are invalid, the reason for this is from the last thirty days my phone is out of function and, moreover, the micro SIM card also got damaged. I have been using a temporary number for communication for this particular period of time. In the meantime, I have also applied for a new SIM card and the copy of an application has been attached. Therefore, it is next to impossible for me to make these calls.
I urge you to kindly look into this issue and deduct these unnecessary billing charges and resend the corrected bill amount. I hope you will go through my account details and do the needful.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Prabh
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| 2019-09-24 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 347, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...r for communication for this particular period of time. In the meantime, I have also applied f...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...count details and do the needful. I will look forward to hearing from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84102564103 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65927970949 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7171904112 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39505424421 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126321437448 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677820669053 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187827864196 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806125254354 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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