You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
* Say which advertisement you are answering
* Describe which course you want to teach, and what it would be about
* Explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for a position of a teacher for night classes that was advertised in "Karaganda" newspaper issued on the 24 of January.
I want to teach mathematics to graduates as a part of extra-curriculum activity. It would be mainly about the theory of probability as well as statistics. Speaking about my skills, I completed a course of both physics and maths with honour at the University of Karaganda. I have been working as a teacher for more than six years and received two certificates in probability theory. As for my personal characteristics, I have got neither any complaints from parents nor the previous principles. My students always show excellent results at Olympic games in either mathematics or physics. At the moment, I am employed as a tutor at public school, but I have always craved for a job at your school, since it is highly recognized and prestigious in Kazakhstan.
I have attached my resume to this latter, and if you find it appropriate for this position, please let me know by contacting me by the following telephone number 87000000000. I look forward to your reply,
Yours sincerely,
Sergei
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to your reply, Yours sincerely, Sergei
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, as for, speaking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01025641026 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36550158527 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65641025641 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.300868477 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189903131312 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611081143559 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409351029869 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124216512834 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284019408356 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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