You live in a room in college with you share with another student. However,, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college. In the latter,
-describe the situation
Explain your problem and why is difficult to work
-say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
My name is Shivani. I live in your college accommodation and I am writing in regards to some problems I have been having recently that you have made it difficult for me to concentrate my work.
I am in my second year now and certainly share my room with a person who is in fourth year. While I understand that sharing a room is required for all residents in this accommodation, my roommate has been making it very difficult for me to study.
The problem ,
is that he often invites people over for parties without telling me in advance. This was true even last week during the exam period. I have tried to reason with him but I doubt that things will change.
I am hoping that you will be able to place me in a quiter room for the next semester. I apologise for the trouble, but I need to be able to study in my residence.
Thank you very much for your help.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... college accommodation and I am writing in regards to some problems I have been having recent...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ifficult for me to study. The problem , is that he often invites people over f...
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Line 10, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in a quiter room for the next semester. I apologise for the trouble, but I need t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36686390533 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50173642119 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3315396922 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196885549341 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654156764259 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546268714802 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107673169285 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362582564986 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.