You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport Write a letter to the airline In your letter Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight Explain how missing your flight affected you Make it clear what you would like the airline to do

Essay topics:

You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter:
• Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight.
• Explain how missing your flight affected you.
• Make it clear what you would like the airline to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you are doing well. I am Soniya Choudhary. I am very disappointed to writing this letter. I missed my flight yesterday 15 December 2018, which scheduled in morning at 8am. Booking Id is 87542154.

I booked my flight from Make my Trip website, date of travel was 15 december 2018 from New Delhi to Sydney. To catch the flight I reached at airport before 3 hours of check-in time. Nevertheless, unfortunately check-in queue was very long and unmanaged. When I check-in my luggage, they gave me wrong boarding pass .Terrible thing was that when I got to know the issue. I missed my flight because I could not reached on boarding gate at right time. I was going to attend a seminar in Sydney, which organized with our most critical client. As a result of error, I would not be able to attend that seminar moreover it caused me lots of inconvenience.

I would expect you refund the whole money back. it would be great endorse for me if you address this issue immediately. I am waiting for your prompt response.

Regards
Soniya

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry disappointed to writing this letter. I missed my flight yesterday 15 December ...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ch scheduled in morning at 8am. Booking Id is 87542154. I booked my flight from...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uggage, they gave me wrong boarding pass .Terrible thing was that when I got to kn...
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Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Terrible
...gage, they gave me wrong boarding pass .Terrible thing was that when I got to know the i...
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Line 4, column 410, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'reach'
Suggestion: reach
... I missed my flight because I could not reached on boarding gate at right time. I was g...
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Line 6, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...expect you refund the whole money back. it would be great endorse for me if you ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64361702128 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63827106198 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9207025106 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5333333333 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22447495162 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618640832853 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581343307329 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154925968118 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335862053691 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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