You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
3. suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Anagha,
I received your letter today morning and my heartiest congratulations on achieving the first rank in your engineering college examination. I have also given a lot of thought on your request for advice on whether to enroll in college for higher education or to apply for job. I feel that you should start looking for job.
Let me first explain my reason for thinking why you would not enjoy going to college. I have checked with some of my seniors and elder siblings and found that most of the students pursuing Master degree are already having a minimum three years of experience in job environment. Another information that I found was that most of the curriculum for the master degree are designed for people who have some exposure to job market. I think that without having job experience you would feel left out in most of discussions that your peers will have and would not be able to enjoy your college or understand the course.
Secondly, opting for job would not only help you financially but also will help you gain hands on experience of the field. It is definitely going to help you in future when you go back to your studies. Furthermore, savings from your job can help you in your daily expenses in college or for fees therefore you need not take full loan and can manage by taking partial loan.
Lastly, I have some suggestions on the type of job role that would help you are paid internships in small office. Small offices not only has less workload but also provide lot of exposure to different responsibilities. Another role that would help you is lead role in some small team. This would help you in your leadership skills. I have made a list of companies that are providing these job roles and if you wish then I would send the list to you. Please feel free to let me know if you need any help. I am always there to help you.
Yours Faithfully,
Madhulika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
Dear Anagha, I received your letter today morning and my heartiest congratulations on ach...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the discussions') or simply say ''most discussions''.
Suggestion: most of the discussions; most discussions
...b experience you would feel left out in most of discussions that your peers will have and would not...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ities. Another role that would help you is lead role in some small team. This woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 341.0 206.0 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55718475073 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51510687493 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 290.88556701 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.37855752 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312973530985 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11272267161 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623362073992 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206410416293 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488294937433 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.