You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in regards to a sheer disappointment faced at your hotel.
During my visit on 4th May to your City Centre hotel in Moscow, I had been allocated room number 13. However, the atmospheric condition on that day was unreasonable and the temperature had dropped to -3 degree Celsius. Hence, I decided to switch on the heater, unknown to the fact that it was under maintenance.
Unfortunately, I was freezing in my room even though I had requested for a new suite, your staff denied it due to full occupancy in the hotel. The situation went out of control and I had to buy a portable heater from the local market to sustain the extreme cold.
I will request you to look into the matter and I would expect an apology letter for an unconventional service provided by your staff during the time of need.
I look forward to seeing your response at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Ayri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you in regards to a sheer disappointment faced at your ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71515151515 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79925216302 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0898142485 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216438036608 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756280463186 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428993403099 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106349188007 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393958102379 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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