You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Respected Sir,
This letter regards reporting of my missing bank card from the envelope I received from the bank recently.
To get started, I am Jack Nicolson with ID- 345545, a new account holder in your bank. I was supposed to receive my new bank card soon and was quite looking forward to it but to my disappointment, I received only the envelope minus any bank card. This is quite disappointing as I need to apply for an education loan soon and this serious lapse delays any progress towards that.
Furthermore, I am really concerned as it could be a foul play and might be intercepted somewhere in the middle where anyone could have had simply taken out my bank card and used it in a malicious manner. This may be a serious potential security breach causing money laundering or any other funds abuse.
Hence, I would sincerely urge you to please delve into the matter as soon as possible. I reckon, cancellation of the previous card, as well as the issuance of the new card only, seems to fit the bill as of now. Please do let me know if any formalities need to be completed to achieve that.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Nicolson
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a malicious manner" with adverb for "malicious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...mply taken out my bank card and used it in a malicious manner. This may be a serious potential securi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, really, so, well, i reckon, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62745098039 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64109713551 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7481843207 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317672103319 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110093696685 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112987802443 0.0603063233224 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201593367007 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141232654065 0.0580467560999 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a malicious manner" with adverb for "malicious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...mply taken out my bank card and used it in a malicious manner. This may be a serious potential securi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, really, so, well, i reckon, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62745098039 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64109713551 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7481843207 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317672103319 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110093696685 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112987802443 0.0603063233224 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201593367007 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141232654065 0.0580467560999 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.