You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
* explain why you are writing
* describe your circumstances
* ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Stephen,
I am writing to you with regards to an advertisement that you have posted in Times newspaper about a computer course. The course has really made me exited mainly because of the fact that its agenda has advanced Microsoft Excel functions and Microsoft Powerpoint features. I am very fond of Excel and am already aware of many functions inside it. But, I am afraid I have not done any elementary course in computers.
I already have good hands on experience working on computers because during my graduation, I worked as a part-time librarian in the evenings and weekends. The library had stored all the details of its books on computers in the form of excel. I was amazed at using Microsoft Excel and the features it provides like pivoting and searching using vlookups. I even learned macros from one of my colleagues in the library who was actually a first year computer student. This has increased my interest in Microsoft Excel. I also have some experience on Powerpoint from my last year graduation when I had to prepare for my presentations.
As you can see that I already have good knowledge and some experience working with computers, I request you to give me a special exception to enrol for this course. I am also ready to come down for an interview, incase if you want to check my existing knowledge on computers.
Thank you for your consideration.
Thanks,
Deepti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...course has really made me exited mainly because of the fact that its agenda has advanced Microsoft Excel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, really, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84297520661 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82189958599 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557851239669 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6329703338 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285823447726 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951157766796 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949836788244 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19291191217 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628613917287 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.