Your child’s school has arranged a trip abroad for students. The principal of the school asked some parents to join the trip to help. Write to the school principle and say
– Why do you want to join the trip?
– How could you help during the trip?
– Ask some questions about the trip.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm wrting this letter to inform that I would like to participate the filed trip organized to visit Windmills in Netherland on 14th October.
The main reason I want to take place on this trip is to biuld close bond with my child and express my supportiveness to his studies. Past couple of years I wasn't there for his studies due to my busy work life and therefore, I believe this will be a golden opportinuty for me.
Despite the above reason, I have lot of travelling experinences throughout the Holand with my offcial site visits. As a structural engineer I have engaged many traditional Windmills restoration projects which I believe I can share my knowledge and experience while visitng them. Furthermore, I have visited lot of uncommon, yet stunning and belong to a great history which can be benifical for all the children to develop their knowledge on Holand early civilization.
Another thing I want to get confirmed is transport arrangements between hotel and designated sites. Are they already finalize? If not please let me know, because I have a good contact there which we can get a huge discount.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any assistance.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir/Madam, Im wrting this letter to inform that I wou...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... to his studies. Past couple of years I wasnt there for his studies due to my busy wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96601941748 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90606462639 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669902912621 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7141049389 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0945914852139 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347992435895 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340178696835 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528265579772 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304924924934 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.