Many people say that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects equally. Others, however, believe that students should spend more time on subjects they like, or are good at. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Today school syllabus is contains many subjects and teenagers have to study all of them in order to pass out from the college. Where they have to study least favourite and most favourite subjects and this essay is an attempt to examine both aspects of this issue and evaluate accordingly.
To begin with, it is undoubtedly advantageous if students could concentrate all the subjects equally because it will lay a solid foundation for their future career. As a result if students are well equipped in all subject matters and they will be open up to any job opportunity in the job market where they can step into any field and the companies will be benefited equally from their vast range of knowledge.
However, major drawback of focusing all subjects is students will not get an opportunity to master or be an expert on a subject or on a skill, where they achieve deep and thorough understanding if they concentrate on their desired or skilled subject matters. As an example "Albert Einstein" who is considered as the greatest mind in the century due to his utmost dedication to Quantum Physics.
In my opinion, I believe concentrating on the subjects which are students are good at is more beneficial for them as well as the society. It will leads students for the greatest innovations in the future where as a whole society could benefited. There are plethora of examples from the history such as invention of light bulb, computer and Airplane are only few among them.
To conclude, taking all the above facts into consideration, focusing on students favourite subjects will help to born more brilliant minds for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93884892086 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80838513545 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5336722756 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247878648214 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101051931672 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078812062045 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135122802559 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154033282947 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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