Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you.
Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interest.
Dear John,
My teacher miss Goswami has
given me your contact. She told me that you’re also looking for a penfriend. Well, my name is Rodger Hedrick and I love video games. I always keep track of new editions of the epic old games. Elder Scrolls is my favorite series so far and it’s fifth sequel ‘Skyrim’ was totally awesome. You might think, I am not an outdoor person but then you’ll be wrong because I love riding a bike and I often goto hiking with my friends.
I am not that interested in going to the gym and doing exercise in a close room filled with mirrors. I like morning walks in the garden. Singing birds and butterflies really make a good start of the day but, at the same time, I hate to see when people use their phones in the garden or listen to music via headphones. I understand we have the freedom to do whatever we want however, this is not just molding your good habits in bad ones but luring people towards it too.
Anyway, enough about me. Tell me about your likes and dislikes. Tell me without any hesitation what you hated or loved the most. I will be waiting for your reply.
Best wishes
Rodger
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, My teacher miss Goswami has given me y...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Dear John, My teacher miss Goswami has given me your contact. She told me that ...
^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: ITS_JJ_NNSNN[27]
Message: Did you mean 'its fifth sequel'?
Suggestion: its fifth sequel
...crolls is my favorite series so far and it’s fifth sequel ‘Skyrim’ was totally awesome. You might...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... person but then you’ll be wrong because I love riding a bike and I often goto hi...
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Line 4, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ones but luring people towards it too. Anyway, enough about me. Tell me about y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, look, really, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39622641509 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24258598124 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707547169811 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8453062832 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275778059455 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795243244532 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768516451029 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138776060155 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874609783909 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.