2. Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that teenagers can bring benefits to themselves and the whole society through their voluntary work in their spare time. In my opinion, I agree with this view.
Adolescents can gain some benefits from their unpaid work. First, they can acquire essential living skills, improve conversation skills, even have countless opportunities to explore new knowledge and places. For example, Go Eco is a large-scale volunteer organization for those who love travelling and have passion for planet conservation. Second, like an internship job without pay, young people can learn from hands-on experience to enhance vocational skills and apply in their future jobs. Take journalism as an example, it is essential/crucial to travel many places, and exciting volunteer tours will certainly advantageous for those who wish to become a professional journalist in the future.
At the same time, volunteer work can be beneficial for society. First, a large sum of money to hire workers can be saved, and make a great contribution to the welfare of local community. Environment Club 360 in Hanoi, for instance, with thousands of enthusiastic members has provided partial support for keeping Hanoi city clean and beautiful with small allowances or without pay. Furthermore, unpaid work is often meaningful and helpful for society as a whole. The community’s awareness of protecting environment/environmental protection can be increased/raised because members of environment clubs put always effort into making many people know about it.
In conclusion, I believe that community volunteering is necessary for teenagers as individuals and society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58893280632 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39201831489 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3917876034 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202954511745 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884264363761 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855660395052 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163264184244 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082438365303 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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