Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives.
Mobile phones has been hailed as one of the most fascinating scientific invention in the history of mankind. Some people uphold this invention as a positive trend while other have reservations about it. However, I will discuss both the aspects of mobile phones in this essay.
To embark on, with regards to positive development, one of the prominent benefit, cell hones are upgrading by leaps and bounds and providing us new avenues while keeping update our self with latest news and current affairs. Moreover, By using this device, people can easily interact with their closer ones around the world .Hence, mobile phones is one the cheapest and convenient communication device Furthermore, People can also mange their work and study through mobiles with the help of internet. To exemplify, During the lock down period, I used my mobile phone to attend my live class at home. Thus, it is an invention which offers tremendous amount of knowledge and help us to enhance our skills. In addition, it also help us to entertain our self and offer numerous amenities like watching movies, listen to music and also connect with whole world by social media.
Having said that, there is also an another side that mobile phones have some drawbacks which are highly appreciable. First and foremost, the excessive use of mobile phones and electronic gadgets create physical and mental health issues as youngsters are spending most of the time with these devices and facing several problems like lack of visibility, migraine and many more. On the to of it, mobile phones emit radiation waves which eventually leads a detrimental impact on our health and raise the chances of having brain cancer and heart diseases.
To conclude, after gauging both the advantages and disadvantages, I opine that people need to use mobile phones according their needs and also try to prevent their children. However, mobile phones are invented to support and facilitate human endeavor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...w avenues while keeping update our self with latest news and current affairs. Moreover, By ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... with their closer ones around the world .Hence, mobile phones is one the cheapest...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ith their closer ones around the world .Hence, mobile phones is one the cheapest and ...
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Line 3, column 725, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...nhance our skills. In addition, it also help us to entertain our self and offer nume...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a side' or 'another side'.
Suggestion: a side; another side
...dia. Having said that, there is also an another side that mobile phones have some drawbacks ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11526479751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53145505023 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9434041006 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267572839244 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992683287355 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512069076313 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163294944519 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02095387483 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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