The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the
disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
English has become the lingua franca in many parts of the world. Because of this, I agree
with the given statement that the spread of English as an international language will have
more pros than cons.
Second, English is easier to learn than any other language. Unlike Chinese, for example,
English has only 26 alphabets which are combined to make words and sentences. It is easy
even for non-native speakers to read written English. In addition, a number of English words
have been borrowed from many other languages, and many English words have been
adopted by many languages and are used as part of their own languages. Therefore, many
people in different countries already know some of the English. So, it could be the easiest
language to learn.
Furthermore, it is the language of global business and also jobs. It is the language of
technology. You can make the best use of internet if you know English as many websites are
written in English. Knowledge of English makes travel easier. There would also be no need of
expensive translations. Finally, English will be the most promising language. Since English is
used in many fields such as economics, politics, and academics, more and more people will
study English in the future. If you have an international meeting in any field, it will probably
be done in English. The demand of English will never stop.
As every garden has weeds, there would be some disadvantages also. Many people fear that
local languages would die out and with that, local cultures would die out because language
and culture are inter-related. Moreover, it is bound to be divided into dialects.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, there are more advantages than
disadvantages of English as a global language. Its popularity and demand will increase more
and more in the future.
- Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young Do you think it is a positive or negative development 69
- Nowadays education quality is very low. Some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticise their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss on both sides. 56
- Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective? 61
- The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social problems Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled Do you agree or disagree 79
- Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06752411576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64665580773 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498392282958 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7916170565 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6363636364 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1363636364 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190794218269 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620323758156 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483994410335 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603841360152 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497536809434 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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