The advantage brought by the spread of English as a global language will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
There is a widely-held view among people regarding the use of English as a dominant language worldwide. While there has been a growing body in favor of the beneficial impacts that would prevail over the detrimental ones, I totally agree with this opinion.
Firstly, it is undoubtedly true that the widespread of English has revolutionized how the educational system works. In light of the proliferation of technological advancements, most publications and books are digitalized on the internet, allowing people from all over the world to access them quickly with just a click on their devices. Hence, by being written in a unified language, students can easily access the knowledge resources without translating into their mother tongues, saving more time to research and study the basis of information. This will push them towards their limits on the grounds of reaching their potential, which results in comprehensive personal development.
Secondly, using English globally grants many countries the opportunity to boost global trade activity, which is a vital factor in stimulating the country’s economic progression. Without having a verbal barrier, it is easier for a local corporation to make a deal and sign contracts with foreigners. This will not only increase the income of that businessman but also stimulate the flow of services and products, acting as a precursor to enhance to average quality of those citizens’ life. If these processes persist in the long term, it will also promote those nations’ foreign currency circulation market, which is essential to render the countries’ socioeconomic development effective. For instance, ever since Vietnam companies have collaborated with oversea clients to provide services, Vietnam witnessed a significant increase in the average per capita income of its people, contributing to the nation’s economic progression.
In conclusion, it might seem sensible to me that having English as the global language would have lucrative influences from both personal and governance perspectives as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56507936508 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12199263203 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64126984127 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3499967961 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.083333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16163401675 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538515265295 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341729139904 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962756621751 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373479785098 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.