All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the past decades, some nations has encountered a spike in occurence of ailments correlating to obesity. People who are stricken by being overweight are apprehensive about the forthcoming repetition in their next generations. The aim of this essay is set to examine the culprit of such phenomenon and establish a remedy for it.
First of all, the prevalence of fast food is these countries shed light on this public health problem. In fact, given the fast pace of life begot by prosperity, people living in these regions are tempted by convenience and affordability whereas shops selling convenient food are mostly endowed with these two natures. However, most of the deliverables originated in these shops are high in sugar and fat, which lead to obesity. Research from the Hong Kong University indicate that 80% families in Hong Kong have dinner five times per week in fast food shops. Seen in this light, families that frequently consume fast food have a high tendency to obesity.
Considering the remedy, the matter of obesity would be eased by legistration whereby restaurants are necessitated to enrich their menu with the estimated value of calories clearly appended on each food item. Coupled with perception of personal health care, citizens are likely to choose their consumptions in a more judicious means by comparing these ensuing labels. Recent studies conducted by the Tokyo Medical University has ascertained the effectiveness on shaping public dietary habit in accordance to the adoption of similar regulation in selected provinces. Therefore, with the assistance of business owners and the city councils, residents in these nations are likely to benefit from a feeling of well-being in foreseeable future.
To conclude, people dwelling in wealthy city heavily count on fast food, which in turn induce the spate of obesity. Since it is by no means insurmountable, in foreseeable future, the government is likely to ameliorate the issue with collaboration with catering company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31446540881 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9233648866 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4098896766 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113111773263 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395915446233 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331825103107 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653693336591 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216241225476 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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