Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is common for people to get updates on the latest news from the internet rather than the traditional method of reading newspapers. I would argue that electronic sources will gradually replace the newspaper.
Newspapers remain an important source to get information about the latest news for several reasons. The first of these is that older generations prefer buying newspapers rather than reading online, which is because they bought newspapers for years and do not want to change their habit or simply they don't know how to use the internet to read the news. In addition to this, newspapers come with extras such as tv guides, magazines and sources of entertainment such as crossword puzzles. This helps newspapers to remain appealing to some consumers. My mother, for instance, buys newspapers every day to do the crossword or to check gossip magazines.
However, although newspapers might not disappear completely, the internet is more likely to become the more dominant source of news. This is because young people prefer to get their news from online sources since it's free and easy to access. Therefore, buyers of newspapers, the older generation, will decline with time. This will lead media companies to lose costumers and it will be unprofitable for them to print papers, so they will be forced to go online. Many newspaper companies are already started to share news on the internet in many countries.
In conclusion, electronic sources of news will replace traditional newspapers over time. This might be a sad loss given their history but it is an unavoidable development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nt to change their habit or simply they dont know how to use the internet to read th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75886014286 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.912961133 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360726638574 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121034592717 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086603485663 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20641481724 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624801347188 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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