Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers will remain an important sources of the new for majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, following the development of advanced technology, online news are become broader and broader,as the result, it is the rise of people who prefer using the internet to find information. There are several reasons for the maintenance of coarse newspaper.
On one hand, the existence of printed newspapers are longer than the electronic ones so that the affected range of traditional newspapers is wider. In addition, not everyone has access or want to use Internet such as: elderly people, rural area, developing country,... For example, in Vietnam,especially in the war, there was no internet and this is the reason why newspaper was the most popular way to access the knowledge. One more the advantages of traditional newspapers is the quality, we can completely say that newspapers are worth paying for the truth while Internet is quite not reliable.
On another hand,the Internet brings faster access through many gadgets like phones, computers or laptops so wherever you are, younger generations or oder generations can easy access to. Besides,the disadvantage of coarse newspapers is the advantage of the Internet newspapers, that is the benefit for environment. A research points that the printed inks are very harmful while online newspapers are less damaging to the nature. Apart from this, using the Internet may support you share news with friends, search for particular news or discuss with others...such as blog, confession,,..
To sum up, it quite hard to image that one day, printed newspapers disappear with the replace of online ones. With the majority of people, traditional newspapers always play an important roles in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y people, rural area, developing country,... For example, in Vietnam,especially in...
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Suggestion: , especially
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
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Message: Two consecutive commas
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...s with others...such as blog, confession,,.. To sum up, it quite hard to image ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... day, printed newspapers disappear with the replace of online ones. With the majority of pe...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...nal newspapers always play an important roles in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, while, apart from, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31939163498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9634094069 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8219250809 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234250922802 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811088560577 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485257272706 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129278127646 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272948358516 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.