Some people believe the aims of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe are much wider benefit of university education for both individuals and society.
These days, more and more people are making the choice to go to university. While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of a university education is to improve job prospects, others thinks that the individuals and society in much broader
It is certainly true is one of the aims of university is to secure a better jobs. The majority of people want to Improve their future career prospects and attending university is one of the best ways to do this as it increase a person 's marketable skills and attractiveness to potential employers. In Vietnam, the proportion about finding a good jobs of graduates is completely higher than those who do not go to university. In addition, further education is very expensive for many people so most would not consider it if it would not provide them with a more secure future and a higher standard of living. Thus job prospect are very important.
However, there are more benefits not only for individual but also for society. Firstly, apparently, the independence of living away from home is a benefit because it help the students develop better social skills and improve as a person. A case in point is that many students will have to leave their families, live in a hall of residence and meet new friends. As the result, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to live more fulfilling lives. Secondly , society will gain from contribution that the graduates can make to the economy. We are living a very competitive worlds so countries need educated people in order to compete and prosper. But the fact that in some developing countries like Vietnam, the university education system is stay far behind from the international standard so that graduates can not work at their majority and as the result they are not be able to develop their ability and practice what they learn in university into reality life.
In conclusion, I have confess that though a main aim of university education is to get a better future. If we continue to promote and encourage university attendance, it will lead to a better world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87988826816 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76016880352 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513966480447 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3746073752 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.466666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314958603177 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942887365335 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967053073417 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197382995028 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340004036605 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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