Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?
Mental sufferings and the problem of self-control nowadays have been found in some researches to lie in the life of many people. In this essay, the problem-solution explanation related to this phenomenon will be provided, with some plausible reasons.
Perhaps, one of major problem is the negative result of work undertaken. To clarify, people demand a great deal of concentration or strong focus on behalf of completing work successfully; meanwhile, it is hard to pay close attention when they are under pressure. Furthermore, especially for academicians, the other problem is the disruption to both academic achievement and process. To explain, if the life without insufficient control appeared to disturb scholar concentration, they could not properly master any lesson taught or finish the task given. Finally, people tend to be emotional. Feeling stressed make the brain muddled or tired, so that when many difficulties arise from their work, people would frequently display negative emotion or even could not opine rightly.
Turning to plausible solution, one of excellent suggestions is to take fairly-free time. Although travelling might be expected as wasting money and time, people have to be fully conscious that only after spending leisure-travel time will people relieve mental suffering. Moreover, venting problem through discussion or confabulation would be a better solution to deal with destructive emotion. It is commonly true that if we consulted our problem with our close friends, they could help us keep calm or even offer suggestion to solve our circumstances. Lastly, it is essential that school open the counseling session in which students could vent their problem.
Overall, it is logical to conclude that mental suffering would affect not only work and academic achievement but also emotion. To thus deal with this, people should spend more leisure time and consult their problem with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46308724832 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9692431134 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2971498908 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221236153228 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659626094618 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398000832361 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120054325655 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531911740676 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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