Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
A constitution to terminate smoking, especially in such public place as offices and restaurants, has been enacted by some countries. This essay thus will describe some potential benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.
Regarding the advantages, one main point is that the time for active smoker to smoke would report a considerable decrease as the way to regain health. This is because terminating smoking in such place as office indirectly encourage smoker to limit their amount of time to smoke at least in this place. Furthermore, it is certain that the ban of smoking in such public places as restaurant would be beneficial for providing healthy environment especially for passive smoker. This means that the ban could prevent secondhand smoke and air pollution to be inhaled by other costumers in free air. In another word, lawful as smoking has been for entitlement, this activity should not be for forfeiting others’ human rights as non-smoker.
Turning to the disadvantages, it is apparent that banning smoking on public will pose some economic problems. One of those is the increasing number of unemployment. To describe, cigarette companies will wisely decide to dismiss their employees, if they economically declare bankrupt due to some trouble related to market share as an impact of reducing the number of tobacco smokers. In addition, this ban will further reduce the national income, especially for the tobacco-producing countries, which can be seen on agricultural and industrial sectors. This happens when the profit taxes from commercial-farming and industrial activities of tobacco fall down as well as a decrease in the level of producing and marketing cigarette.
Overall, it is reasonable to conclude that terminating smoking in public offers some health benefits for both active and passive smoker. Still, there will be some major drawbacks in economic sector that should be concerned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, still, thus, well, at least, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3853820598 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06910939144 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.164180982 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171763367621 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663122665689 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523608938485 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116095297938 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279610165561 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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