Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a hotly-debated topic whether selling cargo among nations over the world should or should not be under the limitation of governments. Although I concede that it must be allowed up to a point, I am more convinced that domestic authorities have to take the notice of these exchanges.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why trading activities without rigorous restrictions of governments are highly recommended. First of all, private enterprises and companies may boost their productivity. Before exporting products to outside the border of country, it is compulsory for them to be inspected and paid taxation. For that reason, without these tough regulations, businesses are eligible to exchange their freight freely that encourage workers to have well-paid salary. In addition, global consumers may take advantage of diverse market’s goods. Because there is no boundary in trading actions, people find it convenient to pick up and use the best commodities not only domestic but also oversea.
On the other hand, proponents of the idea that selling goods to outbound countries that lacks state’s control brings a multitude of detrimental effects in some facets. Firstly, trading goods under no limitation play a pivotal part in mitigate the quality and credibility of products. For instance, for the sake of maximizing their profit, pharmaceutical medicine could carry out illegal transactions by means of selling low-quality medicines that pose a serious threat to human health. Secondly, it is believed that this propose can lead to inflation in a nation. Due to the imbalance between high and low costs that are based on seller’ strategies, the value of money will be gradually decreased
In conclusion, it is my opinion that the government should take responsibility for interfering with trading activities in their own country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36301369863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01278005926 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640410958904 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9869918166 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186821532669 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527222583726 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569285619898 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109047242421 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271763897685 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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