The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It can be predicted that in the future the health conditions of people will be worse than it is nowadays. I totally agree with this statement due to environmental problems and developing technologies, which damage people's health.
Firstly, the ecological statement of our planet continues to deteriorate. In other words, fossil fuels, radiation, acid rains have significant effects on people's life and health. These problems increase everyday and humanity each times suffer more than the last generation.It is noticeable that young generation has more diseases than adults and old people. For example, according to the research of Italian medical students, today more than 50 percent of young people have heavy diseases in contrast to ten years ago.
The changes in lifestyle of people affect on their health. With developing technologies people's live becomes easier, besides new gadgets alleviate their being. Therefore some people have an opportunity to work and study at home, which significantly impact on their health. Sitting lifestyle is often observed among young people. If a person will work a longtime with a computer and will not do exercises with fresh air, he can get sick fast.Moreover, modern gadgets have negative impact on people's have, such as eyesight or posture. For instance, the nearest research of scientists has shown that nowadays people have poor eyesight owing to overusing gadgets to compare with people, who lead healthy lifestyles.
In conclusion I can say that the state of health in the future can decrease in contrast to the present situation. I agree with this statement, it can occur due to various reasons from sitting lifestyle to ecological situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32089552239 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80066583434 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6584610871 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253672569142 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907079487398 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653481691621 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173508026066 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921614653228 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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