Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’
How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Over the past thirty years, possessing a vehicle has shown a dramatic upward trend that a lot of states are experiencing a huge traffic congestion. In my opinion, I believe that there is actually an increase in this issue. In the next paragraphs, I will discuss this statement and what can be done to overcome this problem.
First , there are more inhabitants who are purchasing a car. The reason for this is that a huge number of citizens believe that it is the easiest way of transportation because they can go to a place whenever they want without depending on time schedule of buses or trains. Moreover, it is also not possible to choose your own time to travel with those transportations. Therefore, the majority of people choose to buy a vehicle because of the fact that it saves time and money.
Secondly, the govermennt can increase the tax in city centres. As a result, a huge amount of teenagers and young adults will reduce using the car. For instance, in England , after imposing higher tax on cars, the proportion of using private cars decreases significantly by 37% .Therefore, the pollution and traffic blockage have fallen gradually by this impact. Thus, this way we can reduce the numbers of the vehicles on the road.
In conclusion, the numbers of vehicles are increasing year by year. In my viewpoint, I believe that this development is really prevalent because of the fact that its time saving and an easy way to travel. Imposing a higher tax on private vehicles such as car is one of the most effective way to reduce traffic blockage in big cities.
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 67
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74087591241 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77821541396 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.329018243 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207995869629 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718810950516 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037884720031 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127592060612 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043967157206 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.