Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is thought that it is necessary for children to participate in different kinds of activities that are systematically organized. Others, however, believe that they have a right to do whatever they need. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives and I will give my opinion.
On the one hand, there are compelling reasons for the benefits of freely choosing leisure pursuits by children. To be more specific, it is essential for them to comfortably select the fields compatible with their characteristics and interest. As a result, if they are allowed to take part in prevalence-related activities, they will acquire a sense of decisive power and self-control.
On the other hand, I am inclined to the notion that involvement in arranged pursuits for children is indispensable. Firstly, there is no doubt that children may develop critical thinking skills thanks to the system they get through doing those activities. In fact, they will follow a presented rule of those activities and they will perceive the importance of being systematic, henceforth, the best approach could be initiated to the process of handling tricky problems. Secondly, it is undeniable that engagement in organized activities will maintain a healthy life for children. Indeed, in modern life, most youngsters squander time on computer games or TV watching binge which do a disservice to their health. Subsequently, participation in leisure pursuits that are systematic has an integral role to play in the amelioration of the function of eyesight and brain.
In conclusion, while doing activities based on children’s interests may be positive for their development, I would like to reiterate that it is superior to be engaged in arranged pursuits due to the development of mindset and health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31690140845 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22114400434 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9022583021 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275951248529 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905478829328 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461999907265 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170182228239 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048956820104 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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