computers
Nowadays, the technologies have advanced significantly across the board and one of them is computers. However, some argue that computers have made our lives complex and stressful. But, more people claim that computers have made our lives much easier and convenient and thus welcome them in our midst. Whether computers have made our lives more complex and stressful or computers have made our life easier and more convenient is an issue very often discussed at homes and schools. As for me, after a quick reflection, I believe that computers have made our life easier and more convenient.
First of all, people can communicate more easily because of computers. Now, People can contact one another all over the world by text chat or even video chat. Computers can do every human activities. Not only that, computers do it faster and more effectively. In addition, computers can do a lot of hard tasks. Computer also help students make their lives easier. And with its help, students can go online to get information that they need. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When my brother was young, he had to go to a library and waste a lot of time searching for the right book to use and write down to finish his assignment. Now, I have a computer. So, I do not have to do as my brother did. I could easily find what I want with the click of a button.
Secondly, having a computer makes everything easier to keep copies of things. For instance, when I was collecting materials for my assignment, it was very convenient to have a computer to do it. I could choose the front and the size of alphabet that I want. Also, I was able to keep a copy of my assignment.
As a young high school student, I am lucky to have a wise old English teacher. He says ideas should be listened to and contested in a free and healthy way. One should listen to one’s point of view and vice versa. Although some may not agree with what I have just written, which is understandable, nevertheless, my novice opinion is computers have made our lives easier and more convenient. And with this I would conclude my essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66496544374 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9413030873 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7692307692 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80769230769 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28718372482 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964218955309 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117474565914 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184158641295 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631742675244 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.