Consumer goods have become the most important part of people's life. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Over the last few decades, the lifestyle has changed due to advancement in technology. Today people can buy any product within a few minutes and it is considered that individuals' commodities play an essential role. However, it becomes a debatable issue whether its benefits more than drawbacks or not. This essay intends to analyse both views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with its merits, although the process of making end products for multitudes' contains much energy. Nevertheless, it increases work opportunities. To elaborate, today mostly individuals' are employed and have jobs to earn bread and butter which is possible only because of rise demand of goods and services. Manpower is required to make anything when peoples' get more indulge in shopping, workers get opportunity to do work in factories. Moreover, it boosts economy when handsome money is invested by the masses' to buy goods, government get chance to circulate this money in market for the smooth functioning of the nation.
On the other hand, only prioritised to produce things for multitudes' have demerits as well. First of all, it leads to wastage of resources. To explicate, when people give only preference to make products for consumers then resources will mitigate for other things such as defence for military which will become curse for countries. Furthermore, when there is a task to make millions of product in given deadline. Then, workers often do wastage and due to hurriness they cannot perform effectively and efficiently.
In conclusion, no doubt, fulfil the demands of an individual is crucial but it is refutable to say it is the most important and I disagree with the statement of advantages outweigh its disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19784172662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91384891531 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4036729552 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170230437863 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407221811461 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523685449188 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994525114863 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555439438583 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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