A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Concerning the mixture of nationalities in the modern world, there is a conflict debated arouse among the public that it contributes benefits or brings problems to nations. From my point of view, I totally agree with the advantages, which enables countries to become more interesting and develop quickly with the extraordinary speed rate. Below are my clarifications.
There is a plausible argument that the combination of nationalities from all over the world has positive effects on the economics and the development of cultures in a country. Firstly, A quality of the citizen life will be improved with the diversity of mixing cultures. This could possibly be because they have more experiences, interactive acts and learn the best things from each culture together. Thus, they have a more meaningful life and spend more time to maintain social relationships. Secondly, the high-speed development in technology creates lots of opportunities in e-commerce, which people can trade everything with many distributors in the world, lead to the huge demand of office workers in moving one country to the others. As a result, many companies offer more interesting jobs for many talents, who are foreigners. For example, a garment distributor tends to hire an interpreter from Asia to support their business with the manufacturers in there.
From what mentioned above may conclude some advantages, which help a country more interesting and develop more quickly. Even though there still has a shortcoming since the government has to control immigrants problems such as drug dealing or illegal money transferring activities, its benefits still dominate. In my opinions, a mixture of nationalities is one of the essential factors for the long-run development of each nation.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-04 | sou@M | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-11 | Mampee | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-13 | abhushek_saha | 61 | view |
| 2019-08-13 | abhushek_saha | 61 | view |
| 2019-04-26 | vinusharma27 | 11 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
... the diversity of mixing cultures. This could possibly be because they have more experiences, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 815, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...more interesting jobs for many talents, who are foreigners. For example, a garment dist...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40794223827 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13055303646 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7580163011 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225533002303 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727733441811 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805331559432 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162438868576 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032791788203 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.