A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the 21st century, the ease of traveling to any part of the world has been increased, which certainly has inclined people to create a mindset that countries having people from different nationalities are able to be more developed than the other. I totally agree with the opinion, and in this essay, I will discuss the relevant ideas.
Firstly, having people from parts of the world helps in getting exposure and wide diversity at the same time. Even these practices allow societies to get to know each other better and enjoy a different set of cultures and art. For instance, I live in a place surrounded by people of discrete religions which allows me to experience each of them and add spice to life.
Secondly, there are certain countries which are having some valuable aspects which are useful to other parts of the world. For example, in Dubai, the initial cost of finding skilled labor to hire is very high as compared to India. Therefore, most of the construction companies tend to hire skilled Indian labor and migrate them to the desired place. Hence combinations of people also, allows the companies to hire people with separate qualities which can be further helpful in producing impactful decisions.
In summary, I totally agree that enabling a combination of nationalities, can play a major role in altering the speed of progress of the nation. Therefore, it would be far more advisable that countries should embrace a high level of diversity and cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... and migrate them to the desired place. Hence combinations of people also, allows the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95582329317 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65596998205 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7059603328 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755973507287 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284473544375 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364076410002 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566257691367 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511526909012 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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