A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A country is only known to be developed and growing only when its residents are fully satisfied and working hard to boost its economic growth. The country is well-known by the people living in it. if people are good , hardworking, highly intellectual then country will definitely prosper. I belive that in the development of the country immigrants plays a vital role and therefore I agree with the authors statement with some reservations in it.
The countries economic development depends upon new business ideas, scientific developments, and by making economic changes according to the need of hour, all these things involves crucial decision-making strategies. In dealing with such complex strategies intellectual level plays a vital role , a person with high level of I.Q can be born in any country, so why not allow people from around the world to make a place perfect for living. For example few years ago america was giving high opportunities to talented around the globe to work in their country. By taking such measures it really became of the most powerful country of the world, not only america same trend is now followed by Canada. Canada is providing a good opportunity to the people from the entire world and the are also providing permanent resident passes to attract more immigrants.
However, there is a strong oppose of such measures by the people of the very nation. The people of the country initially have to suffer heavy economic losses, by not getting a well paid jobs. Other than economic losses , by recruiting large amount of immigrants country also suffers from cultural diversity. For example Diwali is a hindu festival and mostly celebrated in india, just by recruiting more people from india, nowadays Diwali is well celebrated in some parts of United states. if trend continues to grow people it may diminish the cultural values of their own tradition.
In conclusion, it is fact that immigration make nation great, there are tones of example to prove this theory, so the process of recruiting immigration should not be stopped but it should be done in controled fashion, so that it people of the same country should not suffer economic losses and their traditional values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07397260274 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74451140714 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4135561893 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.466666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130866042911 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462591770044 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271754509137 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786339402528 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353946115158 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.