Currently, there is a trend toward the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and the worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Since the medical science has been significantly developed, there are less incurable disease these days than the past. However, some believe that alternative forms of medicine is no useful or can make people's health to be hazardous. I partially agree with this idea.
In my certain view, using alternative medicine is unverified scientifically. It just has come from our ancestors with their belief and unproved experiments. In addition, there are unknown side effects in this medications, For example, in China many people believe that Chines teas can be medicine by drinking them in order to recover their health. It might be able to help to be treated for their one, but can not be a treatment. In some case, even if a person who has serious disease needs to go to the hospital immediately, he or she drinks a cup of tea or pray for restoring their health.
On the other hand, alternative types of medicine would be healthier than modern medicines which consist of chemical components. Some people do not take a medicine to keep being health with activities as a therapy such as massage, yoga, and aroma. Moreover, home remedies could be alternative medicine. For instance, there is very famous sentence, "An apple a day keeps doctors away." It means that if you ear an apple everyday, you do not need to go to see a doctor, An apple can be a kinds of therapy to protect your health from disease as well.
To sum up, this argument whether conventional medicines are effective or not has been conflict until now. But, verified alternative medicines are useful without doctor's prescription and furthermore it should be coexisted with modern technical medicine for people in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a kind' or simply 'kinds'?
Suggestion: a kind; kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94405594406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81125839249 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3990881385 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172930913656 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717558710684 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462432685442 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117666672382 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406108896323 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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