Different people have different approaches to life. Some prefer daily routines while others enjoy having new experiences. Which category do you fall into and why?
Give reasons for your answer and use specific examples to support your answer.
It was believed that the life is beautiful or not will depend on how people enjoy that. Seeking for new experiences is a first choice of some humans, but others want to stay with daily life. In my opinions, i think that exploit something new is better than daily routines.
First and foremost, preferring the daily routines can help people maintain their habit for a long time and get used with it. Moreover, the daily life work could prevent people stay out troubles or negative things in their life. Reducing the risk by doing the casual works still needed nowadays, such as learning new thing to them is waste for their time, but gaining the new experiences is better for community we lived.
In fact, the society have been more developed than ever before thank to humanity knowledge. At the past, many people in that had learn much new experiences from many new places. They accepted the risk and enjoyed these new things. For example, before people hiking to mountain, they were accepted that they could hurt by these environments, however, they learn many things about many animals’ activities in this environment. In my though, finding something new is the way I can enjoy my life.
In conclusion, enjoy the life in looking new experiences is what I mean to be. Doing that will be the thing motivated the society grow up. Moreover, preparing forecast the risks for what it could bring good results is the skill people need in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o stay with daily life. In my opinions, i think that exploit something new is bet...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...e. At the past, many people in that had learn much new experiences from many new plac...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...e. At the past, many people in that had learn much new experiences from many new plac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g new is the way I can enjoy my life. In conclusion, enjoy the life in looking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for example, i mean, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78486055777 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39652611238 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8388550981 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221079823696 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811779477376 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386337885464 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140118878332 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030045083402 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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