In these days, health is believed to be a major element of human lives. It is often argued by health exports that continuous workout should be taken by elderly people but it seems to be ignored by some. From my point of view, workout is that way where we can get free health advantages. This essay will examine some key point reason behind given statement and possible way to encourage them to involve in regular activities.
One the one hand, health is an important elements in human life where workout plays crucial role in maintaining good health especially for the older person. This is because, it activates the body’s cell effectively that will be able to perform their function properly. But it seems to be boring even though it has long-term indirect benefits. This is why, people can not get its result on the in time which creates the feeling of laziness. As a result , it may be avoided. For example, my grandfather used to take exercises to decrease his fatness within two months but he could not get effective result, now he become more fatter than ever.
On the other hand, encouraging people in workout can improve the health environment in human lives. People are focusing on its in time result but if government, local community as well as own encourage of people can share it long-term advantages, the health status of individuals and society will increase rapidly. Local society should begin health awareness programs in different places by sharing profits of activities also fitness center should be available as possible as in different places. Self-encourage is another way to involve in fitness activities because it motivate itself. In Nepal, for instance, many old people are fond of smoking but if they had quit smoking and focused on workout, the disease would not have appeared in society.
In conclusion, regular fitness works should be taken by older person because it is beneficial to become the better healthy and many factors are involving to encourage to take parts of exercises which I mentioned above
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94476744186 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60915293899 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55523255814 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7602646825 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307590799055 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906811788407 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534963489487 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19261890896 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431159019495 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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