Some people think that children should only read academic books.
Others believe that reading books for entertainment is equally important.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With regard to reading children books, some people argue that academic books should only be allowed to children, while others believe that reading materials for entertainments is equally crucial. I believe that the curiosity of reading extra books can have far more benefits for them.
The main reason why some people argue that children ought only to read schooling courses is that they can be contributed to obtain a great marks in their exams. Children, who spends most of their time on this course, can be able to score a attractive result according to demand of syllabus, and apply the theoretical knowledge over their life. For example, knowing logical mathematic, which contributes to tackle our daily troubles, can have a massive impacts on the development of career. In addition, another reason is that children can achieve a huge reputations on their career. This is why, who has a magnificent literacy, can achieve well-reputation , noted career and great breakthrough.
However, I support the view that reading extra books is equally important. The first objective is that it can teach us viable aspect of life. It is common that theoretical knowledge can gives us with regard to certain particular subject but having external information over daily disruptions, cultures, diversity of society lead a beneficial effect on growing of regular life. Similarly, in the recent era, making strong bond alongside an evolving technology is becoming needs of everyone, and thus it need to be read by the children to meet demand of advance technology.
In conclusion, I support the view that reading books for entertainment is equally as important as reading academic books because it provide the life related courses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, similarly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2238267148 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8413463911 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6689741056 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341724380498 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135073109156 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15747320426 0.0667982634062 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269790290132 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170043753807 0.056905535591 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.